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SilentMyriad
2008-09-06 . chapter 4
Oh Leo! You're in for it now!

I'll be on the look-out for the conclusion. ^_~
The Light of Reason
2008-09-02 . chapter 4
Bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Oh, the raging hormones! It's hilarious!
And I must correct the phrase "The silence could have been cut with a knife."
I myself would say "The sexual tension could have been cut with a knife."
Good story, I hope you'll write more!
:D

The Light Of Reason♪
ahming
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
I read this before, but I had no idea *you* wrote it, haha. Are you on another site? Maybe I read it here, I don't remember, either way, good job, I like Traci. She's got moxy. :P
Cynlee
2008-05-31 . chapter 4
Pesky stories that you think you're going to end with "the next chapter"-- only the next chapter keeps moving farther and farther away. LOL!

I like your dialogue between the turtles. I'll be interested to see your fight scenes, I have so much trouble with fight scenes.
DaAmazingMeepers
2008-05-10 . chapter 4
This isn't that bad! Post more soon!:)
livefree_13
2008-05-04 . chapter 4
Chap 4 - Best Chap Ever. Honey, you have NO idea how excited I was when I read your mess saying you had posted the next installment (I might have literally *bounced and squealed*). I went right over and read it asap! I just couldn't review immediately because I read on my bf's PS3 and had no way to type it, lol. But OMG! This is, by far, the best chapter. I continue to be floored by your talent -- and the way you use those words? Outstanding. I FLIPPED when Raph stole a look at Traci, *Sweet Mother of Christ* and cut his finger, lol. I died; I was drooling. I'm very sad it all has to end eventually ;_;, but hooray! Cause there's still on last chap to go. Aah! I love you. I'm gonna go read it again.
xLannyx
2008-05-03 . chapter 4
Really nice job on this story! Yeah you do a lot of attention to detail, but that's what makes it fab. I can't wait to read the last chapter. Keep up the good work ^_^
imthegreenfairy88
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
I think it's fantastic! And Apparently Traci is a foxy lady if shes got ALL the turtles gawking at her. hot damn! lol. I like how you had Leo talk in Japanese to Donnie about something, totally adorable! Oh, oh, oh and Raph eye-f*ckin' her. FANTASTIC! hehe. It's coming along just lovely doll! Can't wait for the next perfect chapter.
ChibiLover123
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
...Leo's screwed...I LOVE this chapter!^^
FetishFemale
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
Haha, poor Raph. You also had some funny lines here, but I don't want to put all of them down. But anyways, I liked how you kept them in character...but I don't think Raph's accent is that heavy. =/
missingthepoint
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
this is what i want when i come home from school, good old traci time! this is probably my second favorite, second to when mikey burned himself. traci is a fiesty one (like we didn't know) bringing down my poor leo like that, but picturing his face defeated is cute! i wonder what will transpire at the club, if she ever gets to the club! what i really like is when you expressed their teenage hormones with traci coming down the stairs, i can picture them and its funny so funny!! (raph you're not in trouble, leo no lookie) haha.
i will wait patiently for the final chapter. (raphxtraci)
54Viruses
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I weep for the ending to be coming so soon, but eagerly anticipate seeing what happens next. I sure hope you have another story with traci coming out soon!
livefree_13
2008-04-30 . chapter 3
Um, yay! I finally read it! Can you believe it? I'm part of the cool club now. This was adorable. My favorite part?
"[Mikey]who's torso was covered by her apron (which she would have thought was strange since he didn't have any clothing to protect, but since it was Michelangelo she didn't second guess it)" Pure wonderfulness -- made me lol! I like how Raph only said two words the entire fic, yet there was an emphasis on his presence. You know I can't wait for Chap 4!
Raphshell
2008-04-05 . chapter 3
Aww poor mike worked so ** that meal...
I hope the next update comes a little sooner (hint) :)
missingthepoint
2008-03-30 . chapter 2
this brings back memories. i remember when i grabbed the iron by the metal part-boy was i screaming! lol. so far, this is my favorite part in the story. i'm happy that you decided to make this longer, its too funny. traci is so animated i can see her in the series. soo good.
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