First I read your profile. Then I read the story, then I went back to check that I wasn't dreaming it...you ARE 15 years old!
This is a superb and very mature piece of wrting and you are going to go a long way with your work I'm sure. YOu have an insight into people's feelings which let's face it is pretty rare in an adolescent.
I think that with time you will spread your wings and maybe leave fanfic for creating your own world of fiction.
I highly recommend you as a writer and I'll be spreading the word.

Now for your final question. IMO the answer is "no more" this is a stand-alone - a snippet not a missing scene. Don't gild the lily on this one but write something new. Now I'm off to read what else you've posted so far.

Good morning Revhead! Sorry I haven't reviewed this earlier. This is an interesting concept - Starsky's diary and I like the flash of anger when Hutch read his personal stuff without permission.

As for finishing it off? Although it sounds good finishing it there - you could almost do another chapter where Hutch decdes if he's read starsky's diary, Starsky should read his. Maybe Starsky drves Hutch back to the hospital - he needs more time to heal - and Hutch sets about writing his own thoughts on his childhood etc to give to his partner.

Just thoughts if you wanted to take it further, but as I say, it reads well as it is!

Keep it up!!

Janet (aka Kirsty Welsh)

good story. The writing journal was a nice touch.

that was a great story...

Great story. Loved the journal entries coupled with Hutch's reaction.

Another great story from you I love it.