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| Caomh 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseLovely :) |
| samiseriouslyam 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. So perfectly Lucivar to go yell at Daemon for giving up. *applauds* |
| DragonRaye 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI suppose I had a slightly higher opinion of the idiots that own Daemon and Lucivar, as I couldn't see them putting a newly-returned pleasure slave within spitting distance of the only thing that made him surrender in the first place. Though I've often wondered why they didn't just escape together. *scratches chin* And all the times they've been in the same place at the same time and just never destroyed everything and everyone... But, I digress. I can definitely see Lucivar wanting to pound in his brother's head for doing something so stupid, especially for HIS sake. Because Daemon would do the same. XD |
| GoluxOracle 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseA very good rendition of it would have been after Daemon returned to slavery. Well written and well characterized, well done! =) |
| MaggieMai 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI knew once I had read this serious and some of your other work that you would be the perfect choice to write fanfiction for it. Once again you have yet to disappoint me. Very well done. |
| Kasloumor 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseSplended. Good writing and a very precise and moving descripion of how it could have been when Daemon returned after his 100 years of freedom. |
| GoldenRat 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis fits in perfectly with canon. |
| Allison 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved ur story. Thats exactly how I think it would have happened |
| Kaetien2006 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written! This was very, very good. I like the dynamics between Daemon and Lucivar. And your title is very fitting. You did great with this! |