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| maclau 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abusecome back! i loved this story! |
| time16 2008-04-17 ch 4, | abuseHey, I still hope you will continue this story. I really like to read more. |
| time16 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, Kara has a dead son! Where will be the father? I hope Kara and Lee went on with there relationship. I really like it. Please update soon. |
| Mousie 2008-02-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow, so Kara was like the Wild Boy of Avignon? It must have been really hard for the Dualla's to domesticate her, LOL. I really like what you've done to Kara's character. I don't really like her that much on the show but the way you write her is cool. Still hoping for Leoben as the abusive ex, but I trust no matter what you'll come up with something. |
| pilotlover 2008-02-19 ch 4, | abuseWow, I missed this. Love the fluff. I know it's a complete 180 from the show but boy don't I wish to see it. So Kara had a son. That's a nice twist. Wonder who and what happened to the father. Thanks for the wonderful update. |
| wingedPsyche 2008-02-19 ch 4, | abuseEnjoyed the update. Kara's history with the Dualla family and the fact that Benjamin was Kara's dead son were both unexpected twists. I want to see Kara flying a Viper too! |
| Serrafina 2008-02-19 ch 4, | abuseWell, I was not expecting that. Hmm. Kara's a bit of a glutton for punishment, eh? Keeping a photo from the funeral... Anyway, her backstory with Dee and her family is really interesting. |
| JB twilightforever 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abusei really like this au story line and i love the fact that kara doesnt seem as hard a person is this fic. i cant wait to read more. |
| gibgirl04 2008-02-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is a great fic and I can't wait to see where you take this. |
| hipntrendy 2008-02-18 ch 3, | abuseLOL - Poor Lee, he never stood a chance against her wanting to dance with him. Hee. Next time he'll probably jump at the chance to just dance, since he's so shy about the spotlight. Zack is in for a rude awakening - yes, he and Kara are much more alike, but that doesn't mean that they would be good together. Kara needs someone to rein her in, and Lee needs someone to set him free - so they really balance each other. Thanks for the little sneak peak - my mind is all awhirl now about Benjamin and I'm guessing the relationship is a little closer than what I originally thought. :-D =) |
| K-V xxx 2008-02-17 ch 3, | abuseLet her fly a viper. You know you want to. It's just calling to you... |
| maclau 2008-02-16 ch 3, | abuseoh i loved it but i hated that you didn't write *that* second meeting in the game... in my opinion you're leaving too many stuff at the reader's imagination... which is not that bad, i just... i've read your other stuff, more detailed, i see you're not into that much detail now... I still love your stories, keep writing! |
| Jules 2008-02-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat chapter...I love the attraction and passion between Lee and Kara, I just wished they had more time alone together. I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops and to getting a better sense of their character. |
| ScreenSurfer 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abusehooly **. i ** hope you know what the "Milky way" is. cuz if you didn't that would be the saddest thing in the entire world when writing a SCIFI FIC that has to do with OUTER SPACE! And don't even think that the colonials came from a different galaxy, thats just stupid. |
| JAT.NJ 2008-02-11 ch 3, | abuseWow! I'm really enjoying this A/U fic you're putting together. The electricity between Lee and Kara is palpable - you write it so well. I'm excited to see where the story goes. |