First Rugrats fiction read, fell in love with it!

Those two where always my favorite when I was a kid.

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too cute!

Aw... I like this story... It's cute and funny
Thank u!

I just finished it. This fic was very cute and funny. Amazing how an awkward moment helped Angelica and Chuckie find a new hobbie... and end up together. Hope to read more from you soon!

Timing, a cleverly titled chapter, and a great ending to a great story. Well done Ramiro.

One way of frustrating the hell out of your opponent is to "deprive him of an adversary". Most "enemies", especially personal ones, usually torment others simply because they have someone to torment. So, if Chuckie accepted Angelica's challenge only because she threatened to hurt Tommy, he could have done two things:

1. Just keep running from her ("But I don't know how to pin you down!!") until she screamed and left (thus he "saves" Tommy, and end of story, I know, but hey, I never did like Angelica :D ) or

2. At her first move, let himself fall on his back and allow her to "pin" him, without struggling ("Well, you won, Angelica") and he still saves Tommy. (see above :D ). Her "victory" is short-lived and without any challenge or effort, making it unsavory and unsatisfactory. ("Why don't you DO something, Finster??" "I'm only doing this to protect Tommy!!)

In either, Angelica is deprived of an adversary, and her "victory" is only by forfeit. After that, I don't see why Chuckie and the rest wouldn't have just simply gone back in the house and ignored Angelica and her strange grown-up game.

He he, that's really not much different from anything I've seen from the WWF or the Mexican A :D

I know the point of the story is to hook up Chuckie and Angelica through wrestling, but her threat against Tommy sort of throws a different perspective (and a different point, too) concerning her motives. Of course, either of the above divergences would have resulted in a terribly short story (even if Chuckie "defeats" Angelica by deliberately losing against her), but who here doesn't want to see Angelica NOT getting her own way? :D

After the above, maybe you could have made the story a bit longer by trying to get Susie or even Harold to try out the game.

And I bet Harold would have given her a bloody nose :D :D :D

This chapter was incredibly adorable. Dot Warner could suffer a cuteness overload from reading this.

Nice start.

Really good fanfiction, well done :)

Good chapter and I really found the epilogue following those thoughts very funny. Especially the part where they were ACTUALLY wrestling in bed whereas most normal parents were just...doing naughty things that make kids. There, I said it without the three letter word. :) The ending was very nice and I just had to laugh at Angelica's comment to Finster. :)
Keep up the good work!

Kawaii!! I loved it!! Heheh!! What a fetish. Sex after wrestling? Whoah. I wonder how they ever manage to finish a round. Hahaha.

Very nice chapter and it was a nice way to see the babies having fun without arguing or getting hurt.

Nice chapter. I like the set up for the wrestling thing and the way that the babies kept getting the names or concepts wrong. :) Should be interesting to see what happens next.
Keep up the good work! :)

Great job of keeping it at a wholesome rating; you were right. It was good. The innuendo there without actually saying it was great, with Drew and Charlotte trying to explain what they were doing for her; they couldn't have done much better, it's true, with her at that age.

I like how you had the epilogue, and also her talking to you at the start and end. (Wonder what she'd say about my stories. Maybe insisting she's not that bad, then I point out canon episodes, she complains she asked for *one* example...sort of like with her as Calvin and as Hobbes would be :-)

Keep up the good work.

Thanks for another great story.I'm glade you keep it a K rating story too.Some people get a little weird onto a few children stories.That most of been funny when angelica and chuckie fuggered out what her parents really mean about (wrestling partner).