*points* HO-MG! I love, I love! *bounces*

This was the perfect thing to finish off a rather lame Australia day. It made me extremely happy.

I love how you've characterised them fighting over girls. I'm someone that can't see it happening. Somehow I see Galian as being - Erm... How to put it? - Responsible? No. I'm sure you get what I'm saying though; Nanashi's got a wild attitude, I think of Galian as being more loyal to one or two people at most and only if they knew each other very well. Otherwise, I see him picking girls up from who-knows-where and depositing them at who-knows-where soon afterward. XD He's not obvious or outward with his trysts. Keep private things private and all that... I've completely disemboweled this paragraph... Moving on...

Yes. I love how you've done this. The way you described how it started and why, then how it developed, how it ended and finally the consequences of it was all marvelously done. The pace was great, not rushed, but not unbearably slow either. Purr-fect! Awesome.

I'm thinking this happened before the War Games, as they weren't mentioned (and if they happened after, please don't tell me. You'll break my itty-bitty heart). I'm also thinking the image of a drunken Galian stumbling over Nanashi made my inner fangirl indescribably happy. Seriously... I'm still smiling. So cute! Painful and wince-worthy, but cute. _

Awesome work all around lovely! You've done good. *thumbs up*

- Woffy