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It's a cute story and easy to read. You did a good job accurately portraying the characters. There were many small grammar errors you should fix but nothing catastrophic either. Personally, I feel like the phrase, "... useless" was used too much. Overall, it was a fun fic. Nicely done. :D

I thought it was nicely written, overall. The flow was even-- the story didn't seem to jerky. You also got the personalities down pretty well.

Most of the things I noticed that distracted me were spelling errors. Her name is Priscilla, not Pricilla. Some kind of punctuation has to go at the end of each sentence-- like here.

“Don’t be silly.” Said Eliwood, giving the healer his best reassuring smile

Also, it's troubadour-- but then again, troubadour is a difficult word to spell, and you were close enough that I knew what you meant.

All in all, very good; just a few things that I noticed needed fixing. I wish you luck in your contest!

Hey! I liked it a lot! I hope you update soon! I like the Hector/Lyn pairing... update soon? Please?