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D3ath Mess3nger
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
And HERE WE GO AGAIN!!

Well, I think you got him a little too much megalomaniacal... But the story is great!
geckopaws
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
You should of had L come and say something to him. That would have been a lot more interesting.
SakuraCa
2009-02-26 . chapter 1
Awesome. Brilliant. I... oh, my god. This is so like Light to find new opportunities in such a bad situations. I thought it was pretty harsh of Sochiro to criticize Light so much, because no matter what, this whole Kira crusade was because Light was trying to help the world. As for the number, I found it way too high. L noticed when Kira started to eliminate lesser criminals and add to the fact that Light had access to NPA database, one would think that the percentage of the innocent would be rather low.


Anyway, Loved the story. I really would like to see this continued.
Ashayu
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
I had the same idea about humans using the death note, but I guess I wasn't that original xD

Anyways, great fic. I'd really like to read more fics with Shinigami!Kira, and your idea about trying to eliminate Shinigami King is awesome :)
jirya
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
it was so good i hope you write a sequal
RavenZERO0000
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
this was a good story for the ending of light yagami and good idea for a new plot idea you should go with it
StormWolf91
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
This is the first Death Note fic I read, and I have to say its great! I've always liked the idea of Light becoming a Shinigami after death, it suits him. A sequel would be interesting too, eh?
Ranekaera
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
I DEMAND THAT YOU UPDATE THIS!
H-bomber
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Definatly do the sequel, of course with Light winning.
Amnesia Nymph
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
he didn't only kill innocent criminals if you consider it that way but also a lot of FBI agents who were trying to do good as well as Ray Penbar's wife/fiancée?

anyway, great story. I've always wondered about what could've happened with light after Ryuk wrote his name in the death note. A sparkling shinigami, hehehe.

I wonder what would've happened with It hadn't been light's father to judge him but Rem instead... I bet she would've gotten him back for leading her into death. Impossible ofcourse since she already was a shinigami.

Anyway, liked the fact your fic was detailed and didn't only consist out of conversations. You actually used facts from the series/manga.

great job! into faves list this story goes!

~ Amnesia Nymph
DarkLight's Pen
2008-02-07 . chapter 1
I liked it. I've also thought that DN users would go become shinigami.
gaul1
2008-02-01 . chapter 1
interesting storyline, byes
DiMeraslover
2008-01-27 . chapter 1
Now this rocks! Light no longer is dwelling on stuff he can't change. he's out to change two worlds now. and I think he's got a good chance at it. if anything, he's going to make life very interesting in the shinigami world. I think the higher powers are going to regert not sending him to some prison/hell. Sorry about being so late on this. brilliant fic!
InuJoey
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
This is good. sends you a shinigami. And a truck load of apples.
Spaceman
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
Cool Story! Light became a literal god of death. What about fangirl Misa Amane, the Second Kira? Teru Mikami, the Third Kira?

Three is a powerful number in Japan. See "Power Trio" at tvtropes DOT org. The three Kiras would be a perfect Trinity.
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