EK! THAT WAS SO CUTE!

Yeah, I'm not sure I understand Shika's role in this story. But the plot is nice, and the NejiTen is nice. Great job!

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the whole coffee theme was so cute! LUV it!!

~Dreaming101

Very cute. Just out of curiosity, why is this under the Western genre? Unless you're interpreting the west as like, New York or something, but I always thought of the west as the "Wild, wild, west." Just a thought.

that's way too cute! you just used my favorite character Shikamaru incredulously. gotta love it! i like the way you write and the way you portrayed the characters. i can really see how neji and tenten talked to each other and yeah, gotta love the twitching of neji's face. haha! nice work!

Nice story!

im confused. but whatever. it was good.

This is very nicely written. Subtle... but still very sweet. :D

You ARE continuing this, right?

You've got the AU down really well, and I like your style. Everyone is in character. The whole coffee theme is awesome.

Nicely done thus far! I'd like to see how this story will end, so please update. =)

Very cute so far. Please tell me there's gonna be more! I wanna know how Shikamaru knows Tenten! Please write more!

That was so cool! I love the flow of it and the Shikamaru cameo. (His deviousness is why I like him ^__^)
It makes me want more, though. Maybe you could continue it? :]

I enjoyed it :) Made me crave for a cup of coffee too lol

this was a cute story. the ending was different than i imagined, but i still liked it (it was a nice change from predictable endings). i'm still confused on what part shikamaru played though.