I love your story and congrates on the email!

LOL (at last line) ^^

i DO like this ^^

I like it!

Wow!! This is great! Thanks for writing!

Love the "Princess Bride" reference.

*The priest droned on and on; Eric was very much aware that his bride, his Ariel, was extremely close to him, and was currently being married to him, and only heard brief phrases: “matrimony”, “bond”, “salad spinner”, “love, honour, and obey”.*

I forgot to tell you how much I liked that line. Congrats on your invite to that site.

I absolutly loved this story. Your writing style is very entertaining. I especially loved incorporation of the Princess Bride priest. It made my day!

Aww...sweet!

I'm of two minds regarding this chapter. The writing was, as usual, wondeful, but it felt much too short. More build-up before the wedding, maybe even amounting to a chapter or two wpuld have been very welcome. I did like it, but I really wish there had been more story TO like.

Beautiful job! I really enjoyed this story and hope to read the other companion piece soon. :) Loved it.

As I read this I noticed there was a Little Mermaid ad at the bottom. Awesome.

aww. cute.
~Mel

This is so cute! Is this going to be an ongoing story, or will it end in the same timeframe of the film?

lovely story! please update soon!