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BonesDBchippie
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseSiapom~

** AS much as it pains me to NOT do a true review...alas, I must remain biased so...
Thank you for your entry into this month's Cullen's Bull-Pen Challenge. Your ff has been read by official (yeah, yeah, we all know how important it sounds huh!?) January judge: ~BonesDBchippie. Good Luck **

Happy Super Bowl Sunday!

~G :D
redrider6612
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseOh, c'mon, that was great! Certainly not what I was expecting, which is a good thing. Who wants to read something predictable? Very cute and I can't believe how mean they were to him! Good luck with the challenge.
kmmp99
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseLMBO!! Poor Zachy but that was was just hilarious!
spacekid77
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseThis was hilarious... mean... but hilarious! Poor Zach!
You had me going until he slid his lab coat under the door... I thought he was stuck in his office or somewhere... that's when I put it all together that he was in a bathroom stall...
Good one!
~space
PurplePicklesUnite
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseHaha very cute and funny. As soon as I read the title I started laughing like crazy. Poor Zach!
goldpiece
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseYou know what was missing here? the ominous squeaking of a wheel before a sock monkey in a roller skate flew under the door.

Why does that seem so funny to me? Oh that's right, big monkey, big monkey, big monkey!

This was very cute and gave me quite a chuckle. Well done.

Melissa
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