| Reviews for The Perfect Day |
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abbyweyr 5/4/12 . chapter 12wondering where you are going with the nightmares and how twist from original. but have to wait until later today to read. |
abbyweyr 5/4/12 . chapter 6nice set up of Mike. Very beautiful last dance. |
abbyweyr 5/4/12 . chapter 10her error and her save. nicely played. |
tds88 1/19/11 . chapter 12I could have sworn that I read these stories but I guess I must have just added them to my need to read list. I truly loved the first couple of stories..The Talk, Practicing and now The Perfect Day. Your writing reminds me a lot of how Stephenie Meyer writes. You were able to keep them in character and build off a plot that just seemed to create itself. I loved the wedding day. It really did seem perfect. The way Edward and Charlie had their moment and Bella got back at Mike. It all happened exactly as I would have expected. I really liked the vows and inclusion of the comet metaphor in the story. I can't wait to read the next one. |
jennyap 10/31/10 . chapter 3"I'm Alice!" - its so Alice |
AniePen 4/30/10 . chapter 13great story |
Skyerydr 4/3/10 . chapter 13Absolutely charming. I am so happy you finished the story and in such a sweet and loving way. Please keep writing, you work is engaging and enjoyable, I couldn't stop reading! |
Runs-at-dawn 3/3/10 . chapter 7Hehe that was sexy and sweet at the same time. |
Runs-at-dawn 3/3/10 . chapter 3rofl omg yes beat up Newton |
Runs-at-dawn 3/3/10 . chapter 2love it |
JenRar 12/17/09 . chapter 5Hah. I sang Everything I Do to my husband during our wedding. :D |
Dr. Fang's Girl 8/13/09 . chapter 8Oh my god! it's tanya! bum,bum,buum! |
Dr. Fang's Girl 8/13/09 . chapter 6aww! it was cheesey, but i liked it! |
Dr. Fang's Girl 8/13/09 . chapter 4i LOVED the vows! those were some of the best edward/bella vows i've read! |
former.trackstar 7/15/09 . chapter 8oh what a cliffy. but why are they going to Ak? Why not somewhere more...fun and exotic? Maybe you explained this in one of the proceeding stories. |