lol this is reallyy good

OME that was SO hilarious! I was crying and laughing reading the first chapter, and the part where she licked *giggles* Edward. xD

OMG! THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE FUNNIEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! I'M STILL WIPING TEARS FROM MY EYES. LOL

omg that was really funny!! haha i just watched A christmas story!! haha my sister hates the part where he gets his tongue stuck!!

Hahaha.
Love this story.
“I will not stick to my boyfriend.” Laughed so hard at that.
Great work!

lol funny and cute

Dude, they sound like they are about to watch porn.

Please continue...

You need another disclaimer.

*Don't read if you are eating, drinking or have bladder problems.

I spit my coke out and peed a little.

please update!

Really enjoyed myself. More giggles to come?

Histerical and hot in equal portions!

(I ADORE 'A Christmas Story' and just about fell on the floor lmoa at that part!)

Funny story! the end was... random, but I loved it! Jacob is awesome, hes so funny!

oo update soon!

great story! keep it up!

great story