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Scarlet Madness
2008-02-09
ch 1,
abuseAgreeing with the first reviewer... remove the bold... so if you leave the lyrics in italics, you can still see the difference. Or leave the lyrics only in bold with no italics and leave the text without formatting.

This is was so mushy, dude @_@ =) So you know what my reaction is going to be like anyway... *dies*
TickleBug
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseAw! That is so swwet. You really should make a sequal out of it. Or maybe continue it or something.
Fire of Thine Eyes
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abusesweet, very sweet... though, next time you write a fanfic, go easy on the italics... sometimes they hurt my eyes... and im sure im not the only one.
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