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Reviews For: Touch of the Soul

NoMoreThanProse
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseGenius. I love how you've set out the last part, with both Sasuke and Naruto thinking the same thing at the same time. It'd be pretty freaky if that happened in real life O.o
The concept about why people shake hands is interesting. Did you think of that yourself?
You've really created the idea of a connection between the two that the manga/anime couldn't hope to create in the same way. Their relationship in this seems... intimate. Not in a lovers kind of way, but more like they are brothers.
Yeah... Even though they are totally different, I can see them as brothers. Weird.
Good choice of title! :)
LizUchiha
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseLovely one-shot, so yeah...I really seriously liked it, so yeah...specally the end, so yeah...so...I don't know! But--perfect! The words were beautifully put together and I seriously don't know how to say how much I liked this, so yeah...well...

It made me feel warm inside.
timme
2008-01-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseshaking hands is a tradition that goes back to ancient rome. they use to clasp each others forearms when you met someone to see if they had a dagger hidden in the sleeve. it was a show of trust.
brightgreenskribbles
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseAw sweetness! this was adorable i loved it! you did a great job it was so sweet
LoveMeSilly
2008-01-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseAnother great story, RG. i loved the symbolism.

Love,
MeSilly
sAsU-luva
2008-01-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG that is SO SAD!
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