m... Bittersweet? Possibly. I like it, how you captured Ino's character. Saku-chan went back to her Ino for comfort. Just like when they were little girls.

Awesome, much? I think so. I didn't find it wordy at all, as you said it was. It was very well written. I wish I could write that well... -sigh-

I think SauceGay up there (WTF??) meants 'event' based. And I agree, great job!

Hmm... This is quite a meaningful concept you've covered here, Ari-Chan. It seems you know Ino's personality down to the exact detail to be able to describe it with such confidence!

I can actually see a difference in this, it's much more serious than most of your previous fics, and is relationship based, rather than character or even based. If that makes sense. 0_o

Anyhoo, I love it! :D

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