   Shotgunnova 8/1/08 . chapter 1Great story! Some things/sentences seem a little OOC or odd, but on the whole, I enjoyed it. Also cool was how you made sure the people who had an accident accentuated their thoughts in normal speak; of course it would seem 'normal' to them. Some people would miss something like that. Dunno when chocobos appeared in Chrono Cross, though... ;)
Good job - hopefully you'll continue it in the future! |
| Shaezen 10/21/04 . chapter 2 This story is amazing! it really has me hooked! YOU MUST WRITE MORE...i NEED to know what's going to happen! |
| Silent Bob 546 8/2/02 . chapter 2 cool! Nice fic! I'm dying to know what happens! |
| Leigh 8/1/02 . chapter 2 I love it. It's very good so far. Kind of sad but sweet at the same time. I like. Please e-mail me when you get antoher chapter up! |
| Orichalcon 4/6/02 . chapter 2 It's good. You have to be the only person in the entire CC fandom to have the guts to put Pierre in a serious fanfic, and I thank you. I have a thing for the underrated characters ...Wait, it was only Serge who got his memory erased, right. ::thinks about the ending:: yeah, that's right... and chocobos? The hell? ::stumbles around confused:: Oh well... |
| Fernalidana 4/5/02 . chapter 2 this is very good. i like it alot. my friend Pickle asked me to read this, and i'm glad I did! very well done. i'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Pickle's Song 4/5/02 . chapter 2 This is great! I love it! May I suggest that you insert Mel in here somewhere, since it seems like she and Marcy would be best friends. I can't wait to see more of this! |
| veed 10/6/01 . chapter 1 Good! plz continue! |
| Delita-chan 9/20/01 . chapter 1 |
| Delita-chan 9/20/01 . chapter 1 I like this story! It's about time people started to write Marcy stories. :) I'm not sure if a coupling between her and Karsh is to be played out here, but I got more of that father/daughter or brother/sister feeling between them both. If it is a pairing, well...not sure what to say. I don't think age matters much but these two have quite a large difference. ;;; She's cuter with Van, but that's just my opinion. You're story was really great though and I look forward to reading more of it soon. |
| CobaltJewel 9/19/01 . chapter 1 Please write the next chapter! The story is so dramatic! |
| Pickle's Song 9/15/01 . chapter 1 Yay! Finally a Karcy fic! I've been writing one, it just isn't finished. But you have to finish this! You HAVE to! I love it! |
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