Delightfully horrifying. Brillant work.

Oh, very interesting. It captures the more viscious side of Larxene - I can't stand it when she's portrayed as weepy or wimpy in fics, because it's not her at ALL - although I have to wonder who the boy was... for some reason I was imagining it as a Riku Replica. (not *the* Riku Replica because he's a sassy boy, but just a throwaway that Vexen made.) Also, I hope you don't mind the suggestion, but you may want to invest in a beta reader or make sure you read the story several times over to catch grammar mistakes, because there were several instances where letters should've been capitalized, or missing words made the sentence too choppy.

Woah! who was that?!! Roxas? Sora? or just some random character? *shudders*

Oh Dark and eerie! my favorite! Great job!