 Florchuchizz 2008-03-05 . chapter 4It was so sad, I think I cried. It was really good though, I liked it. I'm putting it in my favorites. |
 ilovezac14xox 2008-02-27 . chapter 4OH MY GOD!
OK, U ARE THE BEST AND MY FAVORITE WRITER EVER!
I WAS DOING GOOD UP TILL YOU PUT IN THE FLASHBACK :
"who are you?
whoever you want me 2 be."
THATS MY FAVE O.C. LINE EVER!
THIS STORY IS ALSO THE BEST O.C. FANFIC IVE EVER READ |
 ilovezac14xox 2008-02-27 . chapter 3again, i cried! lol
i can only imagine how bad im gonna be when i read the ryan chapter.
u wrote this chapter perfectly!
its definetly how someone would act when they find out their best friend died.
this chapter was FABULOUS |
 ilovezac14xox 2008-02-27 . chapter 2that was outstanding!
im actually speechless(which doesnt happen that often.lol)
i always loved the seth/marissa friendship but it wasnt really showed in the show that much, and i HATED how they didnt show his reaction 2 her death!
im so happy u wrote a chapter about it!!
and i cried so hard! Pinky Penguin 2008-02-25 . chapter 4wow i read it!
and even though i was tearless u still made me cry. congratulations!
:( it was so sad!
great writing though!
oh snap g2g
xoxo |
 Girlz-rule 2008-02-25 . chapter 4 love the ending sry i didn't read before :D |
 newportgirl22 2008-02-25 . chapter 4 hey wow great yet extremely intense ending to the story!! I cannot believe that ryan killed himself!! Wow..well maybe you could do another chapter of their reunion..lol!! But seriously great ending!! |
 newportz-princess 2008-02-24 . chapter 4HOLY F^CK that was incredible!! I literally nearly had tears in my eyes. Poor Ryan, like WOAH! Amazing, absolutely amazing. WOW! |
 newportz-princess 2008-02-01 . chapter 3Another freakn fantastic chapter! I can actually imagine it happening the way you write it. SO awesome! |
 newportz-princess 2008-02-01 . chapter 2Wow! Summer that was an incredible chapter! It's sad how on the show they never really established Mareth's friendship! You are awesome at writing =D |
 girlz-rule 2008-02-01 . chapter 3 great again and I get that your doing evryones pov very nice :D |
 Girlz-Rule 2008-02-01 . chapter 2I like it but I thought you said it was going to be Ryan POV :D |
 aly.at.the.disco 2008-02-01 . chapter 2this was really good! |
 kate 2008-01-28 . chapter 1 I'm sorry but generally you have to actually write the fic before people can review it. |
 newportz-princess 2008-01-25 . chapter 1It sounds awesome! It'll be nice to see some stories from you, so hopefully you'll write this =D |