Nice Peter Pan fanfic!You most write more stories!And please,I'm begging you,please email one of your favorite authors Goldbryn Callow Lyte to finish her Jak and Daxter fanfic Taming the Darkness!Me and her oter fans have been waiting a time for it to be updated!Thanks in advance!

Great chapter update soon :)

i love this story. it's inventive and lovely, including the background part. i hope to read more soon.

I am really enjoying this story. Please keep writing, for I will keep reading. I love the way you write, and play Captain Hook. You do a very good job, and that has to be commended for its not easy playing canon characters, and I know from experience. Once again, please don't stop! ^_^

i loved this, it got me all excited when i saw the update. the writing was fantastic, like i felt the tension and everything! please continue!

Great story so far. Enjoy the way things always seem to be unresolved between Hook and Maggie. Keeps me reading. Love how you have his voice purr and his laugh rumble in earlier chapters. Keep it up!

great chapter eight and i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please

I am loving this fanfic with Maggie and the Hook together! I would have never considered the two of them together, but after reading it I find the idea wonderful. Please don't give up posting. I will truly read every post you write. You do a very good Captain Hook! Can't wait for Chapter 9!

Omg. I loved the story. It was wonderful. It is by far my favorite Hook story. Please please please update it soon.

Your story is really good! Peter's daughter in love with Hook? It's perfect! Blood Curse gives it an interesting twist. It gives the story a whole new plot. Please update soon!

The blood curse is a very good twist. You are very creative and have a great talent for writing. Update soon!

This is a really good story. You do a great job of portraying Maggies conflicting emotions.

Interesting concept. I am excited to see where this goes.

wow, i really like it so far, update again soon.

sister whos name i should not mention I TOTALLY HATE U HOW CAN U WRITE SO GOOD !?!?!?!? write more plz