 Forgotten Ink 2009-11-27 . chapter 7 Update soon! I love it, it's not cliche, and you don't find that often. Lili is very in character, I like it.
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 Stubbs101 2009-11-25 . chapter 7I was dabbling in the sea that was outside my usual fanfics and found this, I really enjoyed reading it and I hope you continue, (It did take me a while to remember the cast form Phychonauts, it's been a while since i played the game :P )
Stubbs |
 iNNOCENT FOX 2009-11-03 . chapter 7I have only just started reading this and first of all, I must say that the characters are well presented and their personalities have translated across from the game easily. The concept is brilliant and by placing Lili and Raz at the same university you can weave an original tale about the two. This is by far my favourite Psychonauts story and I look forward to updates in the near future. Just proof it a little and it'll be perfect. Well written and keep up the good work! |
 temporary promise 2009-11-02 . chapter 7I think you're doing great so far. I can't wait to read more; I love how you've balanced plot and romance. |
 Alohilani 2009-10-26 . chapter 7I love this fic too! Everyone seems well characterized and the mystery plot is quite intriguing. |
 yamiishot 2009-10-23 . chapter 7Wow, I can't wait to see where this goes ! |
 PashaPup 2009-10-21 . chapter 7this is an amazing fanfiction, one of the best psychonaut one's I've read. it's addicting! C: |
 PashaPup 2009-10-19 . chapter 1Just read the first chapter. Really love it so far. C: |
 A Flying Tomato 2009-10-19 . chapter 7Still alive and kicking I see
Welcome back! |
 Armageddemon 2009-10-18 . chapter 7Glad to see this story is still alive! Don't woory I'm sure you'll get another muse. |
 Seiyaku no NekoKitsune 2009-05-13 . chapter 6This is well written, interesting, and there aren't enough RazLili (At least I'm pretty sure this is one...) fanfictions out there. I Really want to find out what happens next! I hope you plan to continue/finish this sometime. |
 Samu 2009-04-29 . chapter 6I've really enjoyed this so far. It has nice tension and drama, and Raz being a little stupid, but everyone is now and then. I like how you're rebuilding their relationship, but how it's not so easy to. I also enjoy your writing style. It's very fun to read, and I really would love to see more in this story. |
 Zero-A.C. 2008-09-11 . chapter 6Honestly, I have no idea why I haven't reviewed this story before. It is simply brilliant and wonderfully written. The characters are in character, the plot is interesting and enthralling and your writing style is really good.
I think it would take me more than a page to write down everything I liked so far about this story, so I will just wait for the next chapter and write a (possibly) longer review for it. I really hope you are going to update this story, because I really would like to read more.
~Zero~ |
 emmulattor 2008-08-17 . chapter 6Zomg! So freakin' good! Must...read...more... Mixing cases confuses me a bit though (He went/he goes), but other than that is such a good story. I'm always a sucker for the romance fanfics after I play any game with love interests. Oh well, I think being a hopeless romantic is incurable, so the only thing for it is...more story! |
 emmulattor 2008-08-17 . chapter 1I really like it so far ^^ I thought that wording of the "more action than I do" bit was maybe a bit out of character, but the sentiment was fitting. Other than that, great :) (in a sad sort of way) |