Poor Fuji...

Well written! It was interesting seeing their relationship move through the different steps.

aw...


por fuji... :'(

Wow... this is really intense and personal.
I'm in love with the end..

awts.,,. feel bad for syusuke.. well at first.,.

I really enjoyed this; you did an excellent job of bringing Tezuka and Ryoma together. All the same, I couldn't help feeling bad for Fuji, but I suppose everybody can't win.

woah this was nice, im sad fuji didn't get tezuka:(

Poor Fuji ;_;... But what's not meant to be, won't come to be ~_~... This was a great one-shot, I've added it to my C2 community, hope you don't mind ^_^!

that really is a unique style you chose to write in. but for the life of me, i cant decide who has fuji's affection!

AW!! sadfic^^

LOVE IT LOVE YOU LOVE THEM!

Wow... That was truly deep and beautiful. I loved the way you put in words buchou's feelings, it almost made me cry TT.TT So cute,I love this couple, and that was absolutely gorgeus!!1 Congrats! But to tell u the truth, I didn't like the endm with Fuji in between them >.< But maybe you should write a sequel. Go on!

Ooh. You posted this.

I'm torn between fangirling over TezuRyo and feeling sorry for Fuji. *thinks of while* Fangirl it is then. *waves pompoms*

I hope you'd get your dear muse back. I'm sure your late husband would love to make a guest appearance in one of your fics. XD

-Gwyn

...damn that was powerful!

Though I have to have this cleared up...at the end there...Ryoma was with Tezuka and Fuji still loved Tezuka...right?

I loved how Fuji was woven into the story, eyes watching, between the lines, everything. I felt his presence in each section. very powerful.

It was cute.
I loved the writing too, good work. It was short, yet precise.
Hmm...Fuji's jealous, could this be the trigger for a sequel? An angsty sequel?
^^ Happy if there is one, happy if there isn't.
Keep Writing!