 fkfforever 2009-08-21 . chapter 15Great story... Can't what to see what's next for Nick and the family. |
 rainy day 2009-08-15 . chapter 15 Nice story. Please continue with the series. Although it would be interesting to read a prequel) |
 Javanyet 2009-08-15 . chapter 15I'm ashamed to have disappeared for so long... what a wonderfully realized story. I'd love to see where you go with this, or with an entirely new series. Bravo! |
 moon cutie 2009-08-15 . chapter 15Loved it. Continue the series please. |
 fkfforever 2009-07-26 . chapter 14After draining Malachi, I would have expected LC to have been much more ill. Can't want to see how LC handles a new born. |
 rainy day 2009-07-25 . chapter 14 nice update. can't wait to read more. |
 MaC 2009-07-21 . chapter 13 Firstly, thank you for the tales :-) I love the way the characters are fleshed out, given depth and history. No one could live eight hundred years in unremiting gloom and depression, thankfully stories such as yours give a flavour of the times and enrich the background of the characters.
Malachi is almost too much of an evil, but like the old fairy stories of the child for knowledge though he demands his payment of choice.
It'll be interesting to see how you resolve this since the normal trickery will be hard to achieve.
Hope you have enjoyed writing; your readers have certainly enjoyed the chapters.
Kind regards,
Mary |
 fkfforever 2009-07-16 . chapter 13No far... Evil Cliffy. |
 fkfforever 2009-06-26 . chapter 12Evil Cliffy... Ch 13 will be up soon right!? |
 fkfforever 2009-06-18 . chapter 11Great Writting. When will ch 12 be up? |
 firefly4543 2009-06-01 . chapter 11great chapter i love this story please please update again soon :D |
 firefly4543 2009-03-27 . chapter 10yay your still writing i loved this chapter and the whole story :D please update soon:P |
 Javanyet 2009-03-22 . chapter 10Oh wow, what a turn! And the Vignoble, what a superb idea for the vampire community. And of course it begs the question from where is the blood 'collected', buwahaha.
Great dialogue, wonderful foreshadowing on several levels.
Well done! **applause** |
 firefly4543 2009-01-28 . chapter 9i am so glad you carried on this story :D i love it please update soon i cant wait to read more:P |
 Javanyet 2009-01-08 . chapter 9Great plot advancement and characters are wonderful, very funny bits, and love the foreshadowing in the last line. |