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irishgirl9
2008-07-01
ch 1,
abuseNice story! I especially liked the Flack/Angell moments. Those two are so cute together. I'm glad that Lindsay survived and I love how you ended with Danny going to counseling. He needed to. Great job with this story!
xdannyx
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseThat was so awsome i can't wait to read more of your fan fics.
carly-babes11
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI like your version better than the show. I think Rikki should have been more angry at Danny more than anyone else too. Glad you had DL mixed in. I liked how you ended with Danny getting counselling. That should happen on the show too. Looking forward to your other stories.
Ninde Ancalime
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseo That was an excellent story. I actually wish it happened like that... but I know it never would have because it didn't feature Mac and Stella enough [woah, aren't I bitter? Lol]. I love the reasoning behind Lindsay getting hurt, and I can't help but admit that a teeny bit of me wanted her to die, only if to really bring on the angst. I also adored the Flack and Angell, they're like, the detective version of Danny and Lindsay [minus all the personal angst]. Again, excellent story!!
CaRiNeSs
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseI really wish that this was how the episode actually went... I wasn't to happy with the real one... great job...loved it all... I just think Danny needs something to get his head back in the world...great job :)
TBD
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseI think you did a great job with this. I loved your take on the episode. It was nice to read this all at once but I am sure it would have made an awesome multichapter fic as well. Hope to read more of your stuff.
Dine7184
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseOh I so love it. You did a great job on it. And you reflected every character so perfectly.

I really can imagine that something like that would work on the show.

My fav. line..."Fine then, take my badge and my gun, take whatever you want, but I'm not going anywhere!"

Yeah for that! So perfect and so Danny... loved it. :)
serenity2bliss
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseI think you did a very good job with this. I think your uptake on the event was very clever and I really enjoyed it ;)
twinkeyrocks
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was absoloutely amazing! I love the way you wanted it to pan out. I can see this happening on the show.
kcatlin
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseOhh I liked that!! Very good!!
butterfly-92
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI love it! :P
Horatiofan101
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseHi!
Great story! A great spin on the episode. Good grammar too! I like how you incorporated all of the characters. Nice interactions, I liked how all of the characters were involved. My favorite: Flack & Angell! I absolutely love Angell, my favorite character. Glad to see her in your story! (In my opinion, they seriously need to make her a regular)Not really a D/L fan, or even a Lindsay fan for that matter, but I did like her in this. Overall, 10 out of 10! Thanks
mel60
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great alternative version of "All in the Family." Great job with the detail and characters.
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