 nichola 2009-09-25 . chapter 11 stop gining hiro panik attacks. its not nice. |
 AerrowLover 2009-03-10 . chapter 12I am in love with this, and even though I only found it a day or two ago I am already addicted and I need to know more. I am a hopeless Adam fangirl and you write him brilliantly, and I just really love the way this is all turning out, but I do need to know more! I want to know what happens next with Adam and Sylar's agreement, and will Peter find out... etc etc xD.
Please update soon!! xD |
 made_you_look1@hotmail.co.uk 2009-02-08 . chapter 12 I love this story :)
Still confused, but glad you've updated. What did happen between Adam and Sylar the last time they met?
I love Adam's projected fantasy and Peter's reaction,
I love the way that Peter wants to protect Hiro,
I love the conversation between them and the way perspective switches between Peter and Adam...
I have absolutely no idea what's going on with the story now, but since I like your writing style so much I shall keep reading, and I hope you shall keep writing.
All the best,
Live |
 optimistic girl94 2009-02-07 . chapter 12great chap but where did mohinder come from? i dont remember him anywhere in this. oh and where is hiro? update soon. |
 DeLa26 2009-02-03 . chapter 12Yay! Been waiting for this update for awhile. Love the story, very interesting dynamics between Peter, Hiro, and Adam! Can't wait to read more! :) |
 ew 2008-11-03 . chapter 1 this sucks
Hiro is not gay |
 soleilnoire 2008-10-17 . chapter 10Wow, super awesome story! The peter/adam kind-of-hate-sex was, um, hot. :P
keep writing :) |
 Paradoxxia 2008-09-16 . chapter 10O.o The upcoming series of Heroes has pushed me to find new fic, and I'm glad I stumbled upon this. =D Plotty...yet sexy. Yay! |
 optimistic girl94 2008-08-29 . chapter 10Okay, this for me was totally random. You got us all set on Hiro/Adam and Hiro/Peter, so this Peter/Adam came out of nowhere. And all I can say is...my goodness. So Peter was just doing that to Adam becuase he was angry with him...for some reason this reminds me of something from somewhere...but whatever. The anger was written just right and intensity...wow. But anyway update as soon as possible please. Thank you. |
 Liveforthemoments 2008-08-28 . chapter 10Ok. I've just lost any handle I may ever have had on the plot. However, I still love the chapter, the strange, angry, sexy thing between Adam and Peter was hot, Hiro is SO unbelievably cute and I love that they both care about him so much...
Adored Peter being relieved that Hiro woke up,
Adored Peter asking Adam if he spoke French,
Adored that Adam gives Peter alcohol.
Love the chapter. Please continue. Plot is good :) |
 TenshiNanashi 2008-07-14 . chapter 9Wow. Poor Hiro, never can quite catch a break with Kensei...Adam...whatever he wants to call himself these days.
And Peter. Taking their memories like that. Whoa. That was unexpected.
Keep up the good work,
tenshi |
 Aliera 2008-06-14 . chapter 6Well, another reviewer besides love!
I'm liking this story.
I'm not very apreciative of slash stories, primarily because of a general tendancy to rudeness in those I read.
But this one, independent from where it's going, was some linear logic, and a good plot.
Don't you think, Nathan, Having received Adam's blood already, might survive the shooting? |
 E.A. Knightly 2008-06-01 . chapter 9er, what happened to adam? i didn't get this chapter...
~Elyn |
 Liveforthemoments 2008-05-31 . chapter 9This is fantastic :)
Adore how vivid and horrifying it's portrayed when Adam is choking Hiro,
Love the strange, painful dynamic between them,
Love that after Adam's death, even in such a dreadful situation, Peter hugs him,
Love that Peter is so furious when he finds out that Adam has hurt Hiro,
Love that the writing style is becoming more intense.
However, I'm confused - what did Peter do to Kensai? Will he come back? What did Hiro reaise?
Anyway, love the chapter (especially glad it's longer!)
Please update soon!
Love Live x |
 optimistic girl94 2008-05-31 . chapter 9I was waiting for this for the longest time. So when I saw this I was thrilled. I am so glad for this update. At first I though they were going to kill Adam. My goodness, but no...they just made him forget. Wow. Anyway...very good update I loved it. You are amazing and should keep writing. And I can't wait for the next update. How soon will that be exactly?=D But...anyway good stuff and yeah Sylar had to ruin it all. update please! |