Depressing, yes, but very good.

this is really good, poor Oz! You write really well. I liked the angst actually!

Em on a seperate note - would you mind having a look at my fic the poison inside (also contains Oz angst) It's my first buffy fic and i would like an opinion of a writer of buffy fic. I tries to PM you but i couldn't work out how. Sorry if this is forward but i really would like some advice

That was really good. Quite intense, and believable when you think about what the episode gave us. I look forward to reading some of your other stories, and if this is your first shot at a serious one, then this is quite an impressive start to the genre. Please upload more!

I really liked this. It was perfectly believable within the Wishverse and of course tragic, but that whole alternate universe really was just that. I liked that Oz loved Willow in the Wishverse as well. I really find it hard to see him not meeting her or loving her. Thank you for writing this. It's nice to see that some people still write good Btvs fiction (especially Oz!). Please write more soon (no rush - I know that quality takes time).

This was very depressing, but it caught the feel of that episode so well. I love how it was from Oz's POV; I feel like he doesn't get enough attention. And you pinpointed the fact that it was only after the Master rose that everything changed. Giles attempt to stop it was heartbreaking, especially as that was how Xander got turned. I feel like that would have been exactly how it happened. This is going on my favorites.