alanna and jon, right? they're her parents?

I've allready guessed that her mother is the Lioness. The father i probably Jonathan

please, cant you finish this, or atleast tell me who her parents are??/
x

This is a great story.
When will u update.

I'm guessing it's alanna/jon or Numair and somebody else

Please continue!! Please!!:) :P!!

Cool. The cliffhangers are a bit forced, but otherwise a pretty darn good story. I can't wait to read more!

I say her parents are Alanna and Jonathon. The red hair fits. It's a great story, but you dialouge seems a bit stiff.

Gahh update!

kool

Good! just good! let her meet alanna, that could be fun!

the dress truly sounded ghastly! very cool chapter :D

I want to find out her parents. I have suspicions, but I won't know for certain until you tell us. It really is good, and love Raoul - I was very happy he gets a major part!

I have so many dresses my closet in drowning! I heard the discription of the dress and I was like oh if only I could somehow give this fictional caracter one of my dresses! The likely hood of it fitting is slim to none, but I was just trying to help! Whoa... totally just got carried away there, I apoligize. Fabulouis chapter! I love Raoul XD! But you know that. Anyhoo, update soon!!

- GiantKilleress

Listen, it did NOT suck!! I loved it. Of course I loved it! It's written by you!
I had no idea it was George until you mentioned his name! Holy God. I was freaking out, and was like, a love interest, already?? Or, is it Alanna and George's son, because of the accent?? AH.
But, yes, can't wait for more. You haven't written in so long, and I was looking forward to it!! :)