Reviews for The adventures of Dorothy and Elphaba

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Seal Pup 2008-08-10 ch 18,	abuseSo the shoes act as a binding force between its users? That's kinda cool! Can't wait to see how Dorothy gets out of this rut. Keep it comming!
JadeTakashi 2008-07-04 ch 16,	abuseNo worries, dear Bubble. It was worth the wait. I'm enjoying this fic, and this confrontation between the Wiz and Fae is very satisfying. I like how you portrayed it and how he explained why he did what he did to the Animals. Now, what's gonna happen here? It can't really be this easy can it? I await more, JT
Seal Pup 2008-06-29 ch 16,	abusesending the Wizard into action, now I've seen everything. can't wait to see how he does. keep writing and have fun with your new computer. By the way, something's screwy with the forum alerts, I don't get the e-mail alert until the following day. Used to be in a matter of minutes.
JadeTakashi 2008-06-15 ch 15,	abuseoh wow. this is a very interesting twist indeed. I like this. What's Yero doing? Walking away from all of this? He's needed, the brainless oaf. Poor Elphaba. Just when everything seems to be going right, everything has to go wrong. Good Job, Dorothy. Madame Horrible will go down. This is definitely a well written and intriguing chapter. I enjoyed how you played each of the character's stories and et introduced a new element into this already quite convoluted tale. I await the next installment. JT
Seal Pup 2008-06-15 ch 15,	abusecuriouser and curiouser... great chapter! can't wait till next time!
JadeTakashi 2008-06-02 ch 14,	abuseYero, jealous? o...interesting. you're just full of new ideas aren't you? love the party idea and the perfectly placed reference to the first time Yero and Fae realized they had feelings for each other. Wondering what's going on here with Morrible and why she wants Dorothy... Well, I await more of this... JT
Seal Pup 2008-06-01 ch 14,	abusethe plot thickens...keep it comming!
JadeTakashi 2008-05-27 ch 13,	abuseSO, i see this taking a totally alternate turn. I like the way you've given a rather different perspective of the people here. No one ever really makes Boq as open to Elphaba as you have and no one really makes the Ozians as receptive either. It's a decidedly nice change. Both the book and the musical, (i'm guessing, as I've not read the book in its entirety, and only seen the musical on Youtube) tend to make the Ozians out to be a bunch of receptively gullible idiots, and well, you sort of use that to ELphaba's advantage here. Because they are so willing to simply believe anything the ruling party tells them, it makes them so much more willing to accept Elphaba. and as for Boq, well, he'd have to be downright evil to not believe she's really a good person after giving him his heart back. I also like the way you paint up Elphaba's fallibility(sp?) in this. Most people make her out to be this knight in shining green armor, but you've managed to tap into her softer side, which many writers tend not to do very often (at least not in relation to herself). It is an appreciated attribute of this story. and now that I've gone all technical on you, I have but one or two things left to say. Well done, so far. I await more JT
Seal Pup 2008-05-24 ch 12,	abuseyou updated! yay! great so far! keep writing!
JadeTakashi 2008-05-24 ch 12,	abuseAh, this is really cool. SO she gives Boq his heart back. Never seen that particular twist before. Well, the Ozians seem to be rather receptive of Elphie, despite their apparent dislike of her. (of course it was all based on lies) Seems to me that their might be a bit of a discrepancy with that but what do i know, I'm not the writer. You've managed to hold my intrigue with this one. I await more. JT
JadeTakashi 2008-05-06 ch 11,	abuseThis is a very interesting story. I've recently discovered a love for Wicked, and your fic really brings out a lot in the characters. I await more.
WhiteIce 2008-04-07 ch 2,	abuseWonderful story, but I hope Dorothy is alive, and I'm sad Toto is dead. But keep up the great work!
Seal Pup 2008-03-16 ch 7,	abuseWhat is it with you and updating just before I go on trips? I'm only joshing ya. But I am off to Georgia for a golf tournament in...20 minutes! Pretty good. A little short, huh? Keep working at it!
Seal Pup 2008-03-02 ch 6,	abuseMuch, much better! That's all I can say. Sorry for not anything more detailed, but it's 3:17 a.m. and I have a flight to prepare for tormmorrow. Honduras! Yay! See you all in a week!
Seal Pup 2008-02-10 ch 5,	abuseI have to agree with Embers of Twilight: sentence construction and punctunation do need some work. It's just that in some parts, the flow isn't right. You need brakes in a sentence (hence, we invented commas.) At any rate, can't wait to see how this all plays out.

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