r u planing on updating this? if not im not sure if theres a point in read it...

This is getting good please hurry with the next chapter can't wait to see if they can get to Sarah and the baby in time.

Yikes! what a dream to have, and it sucks that Jareth blamed Sarah for things she really couldn't control!

I look forward to the next chapter, this story get better, and better with each new chapter!

Hey, I just got done reading the first part of this series and I loved it, then I saw there was a sequel and jumped to read it. Good story and I cant wait for you to update...I putting this to my favs...Great job :)

I know I've already read this, but I still felt it necessary to leave a review. I love Silai's reactin at the end, her words are very true. And I hope Sarah does not do too much damage! Does she even know that she has messed things up for everyone?

-k.R.

Zale is cool. This chapter reminds me, why does Sarah go back to ehr apartment? Is she mad at Jareth, and it's like a "I'm-so-mad-I'm-going-to-go-sleep-on-the-couch" type deal, or what? I guess it will be revealed in time, Lol. I am glad you got this chapter up, it is a good one. I look forward to reading more of this story, TTYL.

-k.R.

Now what is Evil Shardae planning? As for the rest of the story I rather enjoy Sarah and Jareth's having a happy family with a little bickering here and there!. Ari so far is just as she was previously, and I like Silai just shows that even she hopefully will not be fooled by her mother!

First review, (I think) yay! This is going to be an awesome story, I can already tell. I forgot to tell you, I think that it's super-cute how Sarah named her son after Toby. It's one of those "Aw..." moments, Lol. Great first chapter!

-k.R.