 roudyredd 2009-01-29 . chapter 1This is a really cool idea
hope to see more of it.
-redd |
 mpkio2 2009-01-26 . chapter 11O
I'm so happy you finnaly updated this story!!
I think the ending was very cute. Stitch didn't get exiled and got to stay with Lilo on Earth...with jumb and Pleakly who got exiled.
Wow! Lilo was missing for a week! I bet Nani was worried sick for her!
Awesome story!
You are a great writer! :D |
 PrincessIndigoStar 2008-11-11 . chapter 1I love this story! It's awesome and I love to read it. Keep on writing! |
 Stitchfan 82 2008-11-10 . chapter 10this is a vary good story. and i never knew it, as i had never reid it before.
you shoud have put a note in the descrepshan Yes Lilo is in this. what red made me think she was not in it. |
 Eclectic Me 2008-10-11 . chapter 10Aw, now that was nice. Jumba's such a sweetie underneath that thin veneer of callous evil genious, isn't he? Just a few small mistakes to watch out for. At one point, you mentioned that Pleakley turned the radio on, when I'm pretty sure you meant off. All mistakes of that sort, most of which could be picked up by proofreading. Something to consider while you're revising the chapters. Hope this helps. |
 mpkio2 2008-10-09 . chapter 10Ah! I can't believe this story is coming to an end!
It's such a good story1 Well, at least theres one more to go!
How will they get out of this mess now? 50 Cruisers! Now that's alot!
UPDATE SOON! :) |
 stitch8000 2008-10-09 . chapter 10cool |
 xgfhj 2008-10-08 . chapter 10Well if the next chapter is the last chapter I hope it's more eventful, I mean this one was good but it felt like only one thing happened... |
 xgfhj 2008-10-02 . chapter 9It sounded like a really flimsy case, where Stitch could a have said almost anything to get himself off the hook, but that was a few chapters ago, sorry I've just now started reading this... Anyway it looks like they're going off course to meet him, I wonder if the council will notice, and what Lilo and Nani will do about their home... wait, oh I see (I think).
Well keep writing, I'll hopefully keep reading.
PS. Spell-check. |
 Ted 2008-10-02 . chapter 9 I wonder what they're up to? The Grand Council Woman was right in doing her duty and sending Stitch into exile, but I don't want the little guy rotting away on some asteroid. |
 mpkio2 2008-10-02 . chapter 9I was so happy when I saw you updated this! This Chapter was nice and long; the wait was well worth it! :0
What can I say about this Chapter? It was very well writen (as always), emotional and dramatic...I though the part were Stich said he was "sorry" to Lilo was very sad.
I really though it was then end (what a sad ending that would have been, eh?) but it's a good thing thers more to read! yay! Why are they heading back to the big ship? I DON'T KNOW!
Update wen u can; thanks! :D |
 stitch8000 2008-10-01 . chapter 9plz more and soon plz |
 Cylon One 2008-10-01 . chapter 9Just starting.
That's awesome!
This chapter deserves high rating like the previous ones. |
 Ted 2008-09-28 . chapter 8 I wonder how Lilo will convince the Federation to let Stitch stay with her; she doesn't have legal ownership of him like she did in the movie. |
 mpkio2 2008-09-25 . chapter 8Hey! Me again!
I was so looking forward to u updating! I always am!
Well, this chap was very good, short but good.
Your such good writer and I hope you update soon! :) |