That was adorable! I love, love loved it!

This is lovely- I like how you pay attention to detail. I think my favorite bit is when Ron touches the small of Hermione's back and Hermione runs her fingers through his hair- you wrote that very well. :)

awsome! keep up the good writing! -

Oh, how cute! Good job. It made me smile with a smile as big as a bannana. Very happy fic... good, good job.

PERFECT!

ah...lovely. i liked it.

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