I was confused in the beginning about who the narrator was, but either than that, this was a very cute piece. I liked how you wrote their thoughts at the in-between moments. And indirect kissing -- how fitting for them! Well done, keep it up.

Hehe that was cute even if it was er inwardly sneaky on Yami's part. Good job!

This is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Yugi and Anzu forever.

Cuteness! I love the concept of this oneshot, and everyone seems very well in character. There's just not enough Peachshipping in the the world!

that was really sweet.^^