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| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-10 ch 2,  | abusedid i mention that you're amazing? i havent been rereading, i just really dont want to do homework. yech. im freaked out about age of reason, i think im just going to write an essay. charts are too effing complicated. seyahh. SILVER LOTUS! lovyahh. ps: miss amazing, i spammied your ds. and whats your lj again? i cant remember mine btw. teehee. |
| Coin Operated Boy 2008-02-08 ch 31, | abuseLovely work! This was an absolute joy to read. It's so nice to know that people in this fandom care so much about getting the characters right. |
| celticpickle 2008-02-04 ch 31, | abuseE! Absolutely brilliant! The dilemma was so plausible, it felt like I was reading a continuation of the actual book. And holy carps, the length! I would never be able to write this much. *applauds you* There was one teensy problem I had, though, and that was with Chapter 20: Anathema telling Mr. Young that she and Newt were Adam's teachers. Shouldn't Mr. Young have recognized them as his neighbors? And even if he'd forgotten, Anathema could have easily reminded him. Oh well, the fic is so awesome, it overshadows such a trivial detail. ;D |
| Lolmania. 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY. IT ROCKED. :x Write more. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-01-26 ch 31, | abusedeath is my effing hero. like in the actual book too. gaah this made me cry im not kidding. you know im weird like that. i cry when im really proud of people. and im so effing proud of you. this is like THE GREATEST THING EVER. you should farking email it to neil gaiman/terry pratchett. holy fark. oh, you missed a few puncuations, but thats about it. and you changed curb? ANGEL teehehe. gah. i effing love death. seriously. you made him amazing. you made this WHOLE THING AMAZING. luvya dearie. see you on monday |
| Simon N. 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow lotus! I love your writing so much! You can really picture what's going on; your phrasing "so many loose ends to tie up. Or hack off entirely." was really powerful and was kind of "dun dun dun DUN". *opening of Beethoven's 5th* All in all, it was a very entertaining fanfic and I look forward to reading more of your work. |