I liked it. And if you haven't really watched the anime that much I have to say that you caught the characters well. I've seen a lot worse and I haven't even been reading a lot ;)

Wow, I really loved this one. And that part about the American movies just cracked me up. xD Excellent job!

-Mew

Well,when you said it was a death note fic,I was really excited. I've seen a lot of fanart for this pairing but not much stories. But, I had a certain idea what a fan fic for L Raito would look like and this did not dissapoint me. In fact, it was fun to read, cute and as you always do, a great job. :D

UHNSS

Nice... I like. heh. >D

Ooh! Coolness! Yay for random Death Note fics! I loved the plotline here. It was remarkably amusing. Nice!

Aw so cute! :D I can so see the characters acting like this, good job :D
VA

That was... passionate...

i'm liking the "remember that"-thing too. yay!

great fic ♥

uh huh i agree with Snupin, its realy good!

that was great! keep going!