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I LOVE IT! But you haven't updated in so long! Please I am begging I love this story a lot, and really want to read the next chapter as soon as possible!

Nice story. Update soon!

PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER! And I don't know about the "Disturbance" maybe someone disagreeing on making experiments on children or something?

cool, you should totally update this...it's pretty awsome

I HAVE JUST READ THE STORY FOR THE FIRST TIME !AND MY VERDICT IS THAT I LOVE IT! I AM OFFICALLY ADDING IT TO MY FAV. STORY LIST RIGHT AFTER I FINISH MY REVEIW ! I WOULD'NT WANT YOU TO SUFFER BECOME IMACIATED AND DIE NOW WOULD I ?!?!CAUSE I WANT YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLEASE!OH AND MY GUES AS TO THE "DISTURBABCES "ARE THAT IT'S EITHER NARUTO(NINE TAILED FOX)OR SASUKE (SARINGAN)!UNTIL NEXT TIME !

continue with the story please!

Interesting storyline. Please continue. Now that I updated, please update!! :) Because if you don't, well it'll seriously leave me in a lurge, beacuse most interesting storylines are one or two chapters and its on very long hold, discontinued or no word, ya. UNDERLINING MESSAGE: update.

hey plz review this is such a great story I dont see why you dont have many reviews

Can that disturbance be Sasuke? XD