 QueenOfTheUniverse 1/26/08 . chapter 1Aw, Sucker, I loved it! So sweet! My only real con crit is that near the end you had some words repeated close together like the "...and smiles when he sees the smile..." But nothing major. Really, it was good, and a nice slow pace for my recently hectic life, thanks! lol, and glad to see you writing again! |