That was both a cool idea and a sad experience for the characters. I take it this story is finnished, I'd like more but I think your done with it. Good work! This story was a very interesting idea, I dont think anyone else has used it.

Snape was wonderfully in character for this fan fiction from his thoughts to his actions. Surprisingly, he retained this when he was comforting George and I could even see him crying to Dumbledore, as I personally have always seen Dumbledore as a father figure and savior to him. Compliments also must be give for coming up with a unique spell (which was well done and complex enough to seem canon) in J. K. Rowling's universe.

Formatting for this story wasn't great, often chopping up the sentences but not to the extent that it was difficult to read. There were several sentences that were not capitalized or punctuated correctly. I feel that more could have been done with Fred, George, and Angelina. Although these are the main characters, I feel that I got a better feel for Snape then I did for the twins.

The bottom line is that this is a very canon story that I can see happening in the Potter-verse. How like the twins to put 'fun' above the risks of trying a spell that once drove a wizard insane. An interesting story that was surprisingly indepth for a one shot.

-Stormy Llewellyn

This story is a wonderful and excellent masterpeice written by a very talented author. When a hot day comes about and you are sitting in a class listening to a lecture,an idea comes to you and you wonder about your dreams,so you ask your teacher about it and he tells you about a theory. All of this happens to Fred and George Weasley. Wonder what will happen if they test this theory...

ashevilleidiot hufflepuff

It's a really good story and a one of the greatly written stories I've ever read so far and a good writer. So keep up the good work

This was a very good short little fic. I love all of your writings, you are so very talented.

Hey, this is the first story I read of yours but acoording to the other reviewers your a good writer I will have to read the rest of your stuff. I love Weasleytwin-Severus stuff, I think it is so sweet because I kind of pictured Severus as being good at pranks. =) Anyway, not sure if this is one-shot or if you are going to continue but either way it is brilliant.
~Ani

I liked your story, very different, but very good . . . two thumbs up ;)

Very enjoyable story. I also have like very much the other stories you have written keep up the good work. Wish I could write!

Still think it's one of your best. Certainly the most powerful of the plots.

Poor Professor!!! Having to go through his worst nightmares must have really hurt! Leave it to the twins to think of doing something like that! Anyways, wonderful fic as always!

I just started reading your stories. They are wonderful. You a great way with the language and your descriptions are beautiful. I also enjoy how your medicinal knowledge is more factual than most. Keep going, I am looking forward to it.

WoW that was great! Poor George! Poor Severus!!!

I would hate to live in my nightmares. I would go mad soon afterwords. The one that really stands out has my freinds, family, old teachers, classmates, favorite actors, and curshes all tied to burning stakes, with nails sticking through them. There were rabid wolves around them, and I was standing on top of mountain, with a girl I was once friends with holding me back, even though I knew I could save them. No one but me could see her, and everyone was looking at me, telling me to come help them, that they knew I could, but she wouldn't let me go. One by one, they died, then I was condemed to walk the earth forever, and dream of it every night. I always woke up after the judgement was passed, but it was horrible. At the end of one that was a bit better then the others (my mom, my freind Beth, and one of my sisters weren't there, but my dad and other sister was) I stabbed the girl who was holding me back, but I couldn't wash the blood off. *smirks* And I wonder why my sister thinks I'm crazy.

Hmmm...I soo don't want to live my old nightmare. I only have the one that stands out, but ::shivers::

Wow. That was really good. One of your best works ever and I love all of your stories. The heart in all of your stories are amazing. Your stories are my fovourites on all of FanFiction.Net