Wow! I was worried from the start about main character deaths, but I really like how you ended it. Excellent story!

and hi again! i loved this, though it would've been nicer if you added the lemon in...bleh, ignore a perverted author!
seeya at another of your stories!

hey, i must ask, when Bakura (the artiste) refers to himself, it's always capitalized. Is it because he thinks he is god?
otherwise, great story!
Oh, and I would realy like it if you can reply...if you have time and all that.
seeya at the end of the sixteenth chappie!

I absolutely love this story and I love how you ended it too, however I have to say that Malik's story seems to be .. I don't know but it seems to be out of place .. Kind of like the story didn't need the subplot but don't misunderstand! I enjoyed the story greatly and besides from that .. Perhaps you could make a sequel? Just a suggestion of course but like I said before I enjoyed this story very much and I'm sure that other people would like to see more also.

I finished reading it in 2 days, just show how much I enjoyed it =) but now, actual review.
Okay, it was written beautifully. Descriptions were just right, and I don't know if the capital letter on the word "Me" every time Bakura said it was intentional or not, but it just contributed to the feeling of Bakura's large ego. Wonderful. Also, people calling Ryou by his last name is much appreciated. Most writers tend to ignore the fact that that's how he would most likely be referred to by people.
I loved the somewhat open ending (though it wasn't really open… but still good), and the only thing I have to complain about…. Well…
I did like Malik's plotline. It was nice. But it just… didn't really contribute to the story, you know? It felt like it needed more connection, otherwise it's just there to be there. The story could've gone around even without Malik and Ishizu going around with their own business. Though I love the Ishtars and their messed up family lives, it just seemed sort of… unnecessary. It didn't seem like it contributed with anything.
Anyway, I really liked it and non doormat Ryou is always nice to read. Also, Bakura was really in character, and surprisingly, so was Kaiba. Thank you for a few hours of pleasurable reading.

Wow!! that was amazing!!
i've really enjoyed this story so far and im sad to see it end
it was a sad ending :(
but i loved it anyway lol
Great work! XD

that waz an awsome story. The ending waz good to. :) I s there goin to be a sequel 2 this?

I dunno why I didn't read this before.. u_u
the story is plainy awesome! along with the fanart!!
(please congrat KuroiMezzy for me, cause I dunno how ^^U)
I loved it soo much!! the sensibility thingy(does that even exist?? I mean the word.. O.o), the b&r.. everything make me go all *kyaa!! sugoi!* :3
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ok thats enough of my hyper, I should'nt have eat chocolate while reading fanfics... [but chocolate is soo good!! *-*] ... *glares* ... ehem... sorry about that, kinda start devoloping MPD.. reading way too much ygo fanfics... -_-U...
and that was so unnecesary.. xD
anyways, thanks for the fic!!
^^
and... I hope you can continue with hello? *playing with fingers* pretty please.. *chibi-eyes*

I -I loved it ;_; I truly loved it.
There was none of that usual omz angst angst stuff you see in average fics. This is what I call an ending!
Now, if only we could get movie of it...

Thank you for working so hard on this story ^_^ I'm sure I'm not only one who have experienced some great hours with this fic. You have it, sis!

Wonderful job. It was great from the beginning to the end! This story was very well thought out...extremely creative.
Keep up the amazing work! I'll be looking foward to any new KuraxRyou stories! ;) *

NO FREAKING WAY! I FORBID YOU TO END THIS!1 It is way to good for my liking. I'm in freakin tears over here! I don want it to end! Please just one more chapter, please for all your fans, please PleasE PLEASE!

It has been more than one and a half years since this story was first published. Kinda hard to believe it ended XD
I..think you left me speechless. If I had to pick words, I'd say I was touched. Your writing is just amazing. And that was a great way to end a story.
I hope you'll continue writing, here or anywhere else.

...Just felt I had to say something.

Wow. That was an awesome ending, actually.

It was complex enough to satisfy my desire for a happy ending and for a logical ending, and I loved that Bakura decided not to kill him, and to keep playing it as a game. It fits so well. I love the way that they know each other (and wonder how long until Bakura is caught and what will happen to the Kaibas). I love that the loose ends aren't all wound up, but the love story that you started has ended without more pain than was necessary.

- Anei

Well I wasn't expecting that. But it is definetly the happiest ending given the situation. So that's a good thing. I was surprised by the way Ryou found out. I was kinda expecting him to figure it out, connect the dots if you will. Either that or a shocking revalation like literally caught red handed. But this is a good way too in fact it's kinda poetic. The ring reveals the truth. Cool. Half of me expected Ryou to kill Bakura not out of anger or betrayal but out of duty or sacrifice. But this way is definetly in character for Ryou. He loves that homicidal maniac no matter what he does. :) So overall I'm pretty satisfied with the ending. Even though the story itself was absoultely exhilarating but that's to be expected with murder stories. So good job and I hope you keep writing.

this was a wonderful story!! im so sad it ended ><... i cant wait to see what you write next!