Aww...I adore this (^_^)
Sure, I'm a SoRi shipper, but I'm not averse to fanfics where they're just really close friends, which is really all that they are in the game.
The way Riku protects Sora in and out of school the way he does...and how he doesn't care what everyone thinks of them...and when he easily cheers Sora up...:3 so sweet. Seriously, I love everything about this (except Sora-molestation DX). Their friendship is so important and so powerful; many other friendships between two boys wouldn't survive if the entire school thought there was something more to it...actually, this is almost like Riku and Sora responding to all the slash shippers out there :D (...not that I'm not one of them =.=)
The only thing that wasn't perfect for me was right in the beginning. I'd have liked to see how Riku responded right after the essay was read (or right after he heard about it, if he wasn't in the class) and I wish we could see part of the essay itself. Both of these scenarios have such potential for sweetness :3 (and, I dunno, character development or something)
Anyway, I adore it! Lurve...and this is on page 69 of the Sora/Riku section when you select the characters. *I knew it was a lucky number :D*

OMG. I loved this dood! It was so cute X3 The ending was hilarious. Hah. So you and me need to start on our Sora and Roxas Fan fic soon! Im ready for this!! XD

ooh i loved this, i like friendship fics between Sora and Riku, although i like slash ones as well. its harder to pull off just friendship, especially one as deep as theirs so i salute you for that.


the only thing that was a bit iffy though was the fact that they had there keyblades therefore the events of kingdom hearts happened, yet seifer was at their school? since he's a twilight town character, i figured hat it was just an AU. Now I'm confused. i guess it doesn't matter that much...
good job

Review:
Interesting twist... too bad kids teased them and stuff, though. Ah, how the masses never tend to be open-minded and understanding. And the Seifer-forcefully-hitting-on-Sora part, pure lulz. ...except that it ended with Sora crying. (but what do I care of fictional characters, anyways?)

Stupid jokes made me chuckle. Hah. Hah. XD And the ending was cute~

Great job!


Corrections:
*Try making new paragraphs when a different person starts speaking. Even if it's just a two line paragraph, it's okay. :D
*"A teach yelled down the hall, glaring at them." (teacher)
*"Riku paused to see if Sora would laugh again, but after Sora didn’t, he knew that Sora was being truthfully in what he said." ("being truthful" or "Sora spoke truthfully" will do)
*"...they reached a clearly in the woods." (clearing)
*"He put is around arm around Riku’s waist and hugged him." (his)
*And there's some punctutaion errors here and there, but they're not too terrible. Comma usage or something. Yes.

Ha ha aww I thought that was really sweet^^ Even though it wasn't yaoi I still see it as a very strong friendship^^ I loved the way you placed it as well as the really funny jokes. It made my mom laugh hard, so thank you for that. Um, what else to say...Oh well I really truly loved this story^^

.:Yuki-san:.

P.S Yes Riku you are so much hotter than Seifer, you don't even have to ask that question XD

Aw... So sweet! You pulled off a really nice friendship between the two of them without making it slash... That's really impressive! It was cute, and I loved the last line... Made me laugh!
One complaint only: if they fought all those heartless before, how were the wolves able to be so tough?

lol, awh!! that was too cute!! ^.^ I loved the ending ha ha! good job!