I like this alot. Thanks for sharing. :)

lmao lmao XD

wow. that was good! write something else like that!

i really liked it. you did a good job.

I liked it. Good job!

funny. a little confusing at times, but funny.

Me-yeah.(looks around)whatever.(starts edging away)

dude!

odd... very, very odd... yes, you obviously had a lot of time on your hands, but i must give you major snaps for havning courage to publish fanfic! i havent gotten up the coruage to do any of that yet!

must...KILL...heheheheheheheheheh, pretty good, bud. Little weird, but, hey, thats you.

u did pretty good on their personalitiesgreat ending!

hehe.. that was good! The dialoge worked well too, even without you telling who was talking a picture of the situation and who said what could be formed... LOL funny