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| gsr4ever 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseNice job. I really enjoyed it. |
| jade40 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusefunny funny. love it another way that our two fav people got together. |
| Sexy Bookworm 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseNow that was hysterical! The ending was the best. |
| ShaileeSue 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseOh My Gosh! i loved it! I love Grissom throwing Sara over his shoulder and telling everyone that she was a murderer and that she had escaped from a mental hospital. I loved Greg "falling in love" with a girl who doesn't speak english! i loved it all! great job! i'll be smiling for the rest of the day. thanks for writing! =) |
| Neelloc12 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHad to check out your short stories and I loved this one. HA HA Grissom just picked her up and carried her out the door. That was funny HA HA. |
| ilovejv33 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseanother great story :) Favorite line:“Put me down!” Sara demanded as she pounded her fists on Grissom’s back. She was hanging upside down. She had a nice view of Grissom’s ** though… too bad that she was too furious to appreciate it. So cute and of course Grissom and Sara end up together so it is awesome lol |
| Toastie girl 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG that was awesome. seriously. OMFG. i thought that was hillairious when grissom threw sara over his shoulder, pulled out his badege and convinced everyone she is a phycotic murderer who escaped from a mental hospital.Seriously i couldnt breathe i was laughing so hard. the person grissom said she was kind of fit the description of her mother. O and the last part seemed kind of o.o.c. for them. Also what happens if everyone found out what happend after sara and grissom left the club?Huh? Keep writting u rock! |
| karagrace 2008-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood. Lord. Caveman Grissom!! SO HOT!! Thank you she meekly says... |
| paperback-romance 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was just what I needed until the next chapter of Memories comes out! lol I loved it! I could totally picture Grissom carrying Sara out of a club like that! lol |
| csifan2694 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. |
| 22114 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseGirl!! You just made my day!! The team, the drinks, Grissom the caveman,it all made me scream from joy. An orgasmic scream! Yeah I loved it!! And I'm just gonna pretend that Greg's norwegian blonde was me written into this story :) Cause I want desperately to be part of this scenario! Awesome! BTW, sorry I was so late reading and reviewing, real life has been kicking the x out me lately, but I'm getting ready to kick back, so you'll probably hear from me again soon! Have a great day!! Veronika |
| csibutterfly530 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusenice story:) |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseFantastic!! |
| BrookeGreene 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHoly crap that was long! Wow... I always have mixed feelings on the stories where Sara dresses up all fancy and goes out with the team and they all gawk at her... Part of me likes it because I know she looks awesome in dresses and nicer clothing (have you ever seen a pic of Jorja in a red dress? OMG!) but then the other part of me is sort of like, well, she looks really great in normal clothes too and they don't all gawk at her then. (not usually anyway) Just now I went to get a drink and a banana, and then started talking to my friend about how great Jorja looks in red dresses, so I'm totally distracted... But that was a really funny story, it didn't quite make me laugh out loud, but it was close... |
| knr4horses 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this! It was awesome! I love fics where Sara wears a totally hot dress and dances and drives Grissom crazy, and this was definitely one of the best I've ever read. You are such a great writer! Kristen P.S. Eagerly awaiting more on Memories... |