Wow. This fic is splendid. Your prose...was like poetry itself. I loved how you divided it into some sort of repetitive segments, describing Cloud's promise, his pain -- it all came through very nicely, and somehow the effect was poignant enough to touch anybody's heart, as you did mine.

Lovely work. I can't ask for anything more, or less.

It's quite sweet. Some very pretty writing. I did get a bit confused towards the end about who exactly was talking. Also, the tense switches around a bit - again, particularly towards the end.

I don't know much about Final Fantasy VII but at this point I think I'll pretty much read everything that you've written so far =D
It was written very prettily and feels bittersweet. The promises tied it all together.
As usual, a great job!

I love this so much! *sniff* gotta hold back the tears! I remember when they made that promise and I've that about it before. I'm so glad you made this! :D Clorith4ever. I love them so much! Keep it up!

nargh

I really loved it ! I admit it I was crying i really like the way you write it's really touching. *sniffles* good job!

wow...very lovely.

Aw, this was so touching. I remeber when I told her(in the game of couse) I would take her an airship. But that wasn't as cute as this^^

ok i cry TT-TT

That was superb.
Very pretty! ♥

Sorry I don't have any tears, but it was very powerful to read. I kinda realized while I was reading this that Aerith never did get to ride the airship because she died before she could.

It's kinda ironic that the offical picture of her is her looking up at the airship... Wow. It was really great.

...wow! That was amazing! The emotion in it was just so beautiful. It's nice to see an author taking a look at this paticular part of their relationship.
Very sad story but still beautiful =]
~Beeria

You're scary - the progress you're making, to be precise.
You get better and better AND better.
Heheheh!
Lolz, I liked how you used long-winding sentences here. Kinda reflects Cloud's (and Tifa's) inner tensions.

Stop improving! I'm getting ohsososososo madly addicted to your fics!
(Ahahahaha! Keep on improving and you might just win the Nobel Literature prize ;p)

It was wonderfully written and evoked sadness out of me. Very bittersweet. I truly love this couple, and you made a great story of them. Thanks =)

:wipes stinging tears away: AW :starts crying again: Sorry, I'm on a bit of an emotional high... and you made it worse!!

ohmygod- I nearly cried this was written so very beautifully, and when I was over all I could do was sigh, because I could understand what he was going through, and gah this COULD have actually happened, and it carried over into AC.

Great job, Missy. You should be proud.