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| whyNd.Heck 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseHaha awesome and very clever. Yukari might be in all the circles of Dante's Inferno ^_~ |
| Sir Gimp of Baath 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseYukari's innocent, I tell you! SHE WAS FRAMED! Or maybe I'm just biased 'cause I write from her perspective. >.> |
| Bloody Violet Heart 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI wonder, what is the tone you intended for this fanfiction? Is it to critiquize (or however you say that word) in some way? Honestly, I din't like that last sentence, ("and when she finds herself lying with a woman as with a man") it recalls me of the Bible and how much it loves to judge and say how things are supposed to be. The story is interesting, but I still question myself about its purpose. |
| Spaz and Twitch 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseThis...is REALLY GOOD. Not much more I can say, but that it's awsome. ^_^ |
| writer-jm 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseHi SC! The title sounds pretty serious, ya know. No worries though. It's the content (and possibly the labels) that count! Very artistically done. Almost like poetry! Wonderful! Personally, I'm glad about the last one! (no surprise though) Hard to call it a sin when Yukari loves Minamo though! Hee hee! See ya next time! I was glad to see how well you can compose! writer-jm |
| ShadowNeko13 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseHi Again! Wow... This story was short and very sweet. Using the concept of the deadly sins was a first for me to read. Very unique concept with the age-old YukarixNyamo goodness.. Certainly a great combo. gives 5 pounds of kudos* Keep writin'! ^O^ Jaa! ~Shadow Neko |
| Berlioz II 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHeh, that's Yukari, all right. The most hellish person there is. - Jani |
| kairi990 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... *strokes chin* |
| Hallwings 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseWell, Yukari is definitely going to Hell, that's for sure. Seriously, this is a great shortie. I was wondering, though. Where did you get the idea for all these Yukari-Nyamo fics? |
| Weener1 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseEnvy, gluttony, avirice, sloth, greed...and lust. And Nyamo takes it all. Everyone knows a person who conflicts with their own morals, but they love them anyway. So, in my mind at least, it proves that one's brain is not in total control of their emotions. There is so much more...and Naymo has found that out. Good job! -Jay |
| Bara Aozora 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI like how you wrote this! Subtle and kinda love-hate feeling about it.. I never really thought about Yukari with the 7 deadly sins idea, but now that it's put into perspective, it's so obvious that I almost feel stupid for not seeing it sooner xD Actually, it wasn't until I read the author's note that I noticed you used the idea! And it gives me a bit of pride to think that you might have gotten this idea from my fic. :3 You don't have to admit it >3 And ending it with the lust one always gives it a good kick. :D If you wanted to, you could turn this into a 7-chapter fic, (If you decide to not write a one-shot) and have situations depicted with each of the sins.. Just a thought, though. Can't wait to see more. xD |