This chapter was a very good way to end the story. :)

Run Ironhide run! XD. I loved the first chapter and this one.

Oh the twins are in big trouble. XD.

GREAT story! I was laughing my aft off when Optimus fell over from the shock!

aw! this was such a cute story! and very hot! -big pervy grin-

keep up the great work!

So...is there going to be a squeal to this?

Very hot! Love it! Thanks for writing!

Awz! You should write another chapter! 3

aw! so sweet! loved the story. :) off to read the other one, now!

OH NO! wrong answer, Hide! LOL funny! cute cute cute! next!

LOL! Love it! off to read more!

Twins? Wow! Prime & Elita have lashed out pretty well last night... and the morning XD

Great fic, fantastic dialogues and nice characterization; I was laughing for the whole time.

Hope there will be a sequel ;P

Okay, last one :)

Their on the FLOOR! Haha! - 'Optimus glanced around then laughed. He had no idea they ended up on the floor.' I love him in this, he's so relaxed...not surprising *smirk*

- “Bummer,” LMAO! I thought it was hysterical when he said that! Just imagining Optimus using that word...it's funnier than when he says, 'My bad!'

Oh boy...domestic disbute my aft! Poor Hide...maybe next time, he'll be a little quicker on the uptake, lol. He got shrapnel in the ass? *splutter* too...funny...haha.

Aww, poor Mia...it's kinda cute how much she loves Hide...and their legendary disputes...they're just priceless!

I was fritzing when I found out their having twins! *squee* AWESOME! Lol. Lil mini Optimus' running around...YA! COOLIO!

HE FAINTED! Holy primus, I'd have been laughing hard too! I don't blame Hide and Ratch...poor boss bot! That's gonna leave a mark, hehe :D

Aww, he's gonna give her a sparkling! Ya! And why am I not surprised that Sunny and Sides were watching! Couple of pervs, lol. - “I hope you two fraggers took notes!” he yelled'

HAHA, Wicked story dude! It just had to be done :D

Hot DAMN!

This was just as good as the first one, lol. He woke with the hangover of a century and didn't remember anything of the night before!

LMAO! Yep, he's definitely made up for it now! *smirk* - “Wow,” she whispered' Ha, the dudes got skills, hehe.

Sunny and Sides were hilarious! - “We’re sorry we’re a couple of perverts,” Sides apologized.

“Please, I like my aft! Don’t rip it inside out!” Sunny pleaded.' Lol. Nice try guys!

OMG when Hide started making bets with them...o.O and the eavesdropping...bloody MECHS! They're unbelievable! Lol. I was laughing so hard when Chromia caught them! And then the resulting aftermath of the Sparkling discussion...

The scorch marks on the walls in the halls is well understood now, hehe.

This was brilliant too! Wicked response to the challenge :D