-applauds- pure genius i am CRYING i was laughing so hard!

whoa!
so random,senseless and hilarious!!
LOL
i luv it!!3x

One word... AWESOME!

i love it frenchie your awsome i can't believe it it's so hilarious love ya

oh. my. god. i read this at school and received some very strange looks. and i'm amazed i can type this. but one of the best crackfics i've read in a while.

I read it again, and you made some changes from the original, I see 83. Although I liked it better when Havoc said "ARE YOU IN THERE WITH SOME SORTA VAMPIRE?" than "OPERA RAPIST?". It makes him sound like a retarded hillbilly.
Otherwise...AWESOME!

100% Awesome

r u sure u dont own george the wrench?

I LOVE the Envy: *gasp* *choke* *die* b/c I'm evil like that lol
everyone that has read this, u need to read Frechie's Abhorrence...
Hey Frenchie, the poem is up
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lol nice job frenchie!


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Sarah

Hiya Frenchie! It's Meh! Katie! I have to say I can't think of POTO seriously now. This is HA-LAIR-I-OUS! I lurve it and you, and roy, and ed, and havoc...

Howdy ho frenchie! *waves like a 'tard*..
This story is kick butt awesome and thank yeh for giving to me for crimbo!
GO LIVERPOOL! THE MIGHTY REDS!

I am so glad I decided to click on this. Best POTO parody I've ever read! I was laughing pretty much the entire time! And thanks for the epilogue!

XD Riza got her voice from eBay? Lovely :P You acn get anything from there, even human souls.

I just got your mention about Pinako being in the black/white scene and in the colour part as well. (I'm up to her telling Havoc about Roy's past.) I think this might actually be a mistake on your part, but I'm not totally sure, due to the nature of the parody. In the movie PotO, the old Madam Girie-looking woman is actually whatsherface, Girie's daughter. (Meg, is it?) She's grown up old and wrinkly like her mama. So since Rose seems to be taking Meg's place, old!Rose might fit better for the black and white part.

Also: "Riza decides to visit her father’s grave. Although in FullMetal Alchemist, there is no mention of Riza’s parents, this is the realm of fanfiction, where anything is possible." You've only seen the anime, haven't you? :D In the manga, it does show Riza's father, his death, and her visiting his grave (flashback), which I found quite funny when it came to reading this, because it DOES fit. If you go from the manga point of view, anyway. His death is in the start of chapter 58 if you're interested (don't remember where the grave scene is). Manga is read right-to-left, if you don't know :)

Bahaha XD I love this line: "Havoc, your genius is showing!" "-gasp- WHERE!?"

A very long story, all up. I'm not a great fan of screenplay-style writing, mainly because all it ends up as usually is this person talks, then that one, then that one, and the writer uses conversation to say what's happening around. I like the fact that you had your paragraphs of description as well. That just makes it so much easier to read.

Could use some work on the style (it's more of a crack!fic than a proper parody - parodies usually have some sarcastic point to them :P), but other than that, you did well.

I LOVE COLONEL OF THE OPERA! :) =]
I LOVE the Envy: *gasp* *choke* *die* b/c I'm evil like that lol
I LOVE LUST GO LUST!
everyone that has read this, u need to read Frechie's Abhorrence...
Vote against her making it Elricest. B/c that would make it way to OOC...lmao.
Hi Frenchie
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