 razor-flavoured candy 9/16/01 . chapter 1I loved this installment! Oh, but I can't help thinking that poor Mara's about to experience yet *another* complication in her life: Jordy. She thinks it's innocent now, but there are just some things you just don't do with people you consider "little brother"s, and threatening to put their possessions down your shirt is one of them. Oh, I'm scared she's in for another shock... Bless you, Reichenbach, for making Mara so believable and likeable without turning her into a Mary Sue-ish embodiment of perfection. :) |