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Winta Fresh
2008-08-20 . chapter 6
lol, old lady attack! I feel sorry for Dei. But that attack was funny. Plz plz plz plz plz plz! Update
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2008-08-14 . chapter 6
firstly, your disclaimers are the best. ^^ secondly, this story is really great, and it's been a while since i've found one that's so great, therefore i really hope that you can find time to update it soon! dei's pj bottoms are very sexy. X3 there's no way sasori will be able to resist those.
~lazzy
ToboeDeidaraLover
2008-08-12 . chapter 6
Oh! This is cool! Senile old people . . . UPDATE!!
monstermuffin
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Oh my god, this story's good!

Please let there be a sequel for a lemon or a lemon in later chapters!!
van
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
wow this is a great story keep up the good work!
theyletmeinthemafia
2008-06-03 . chapter 6
Ohmygod, wow! This was surprisingly good. I'm a huge fan of DeiSaso and this strikes my fancy...yeah. The plot is original and I love how you write those two. Very cute.

Looking forward to the next update!

-Necury
chevykkj
2008-05-26 . chapter 6
I ADORE this story! Please Please I beg of you update soon!
Shunkan
2008-05-15 . chapter 6
MASASHI KISHIMOTO!!

*glomp*

(couldn't help it? *sheepish laugh*)

I read this! And I liked it! And I found stuff to comment on!

All proven redundant by my sheer presence here!

*coughs*

So yeah, I took notes. 'Cause my memory flat out sucks.

*gets notes* here goes:

Kay, first of all, title freaking rocks. It does. I'm going to go make a shrine for it. I love it.

But not as much as Dei's pride. It rocked. It really did. It's too real.

CANON! Well, okay, as much as yaoi can get (which is pretty darn close) Sasori is such a...anyway...very realistic.

LOVE the clothing! Ever thought about going into clothing design? XD

Awesome change. I mean, illegal immigrant? When's the last time I read THAT?

Vocab: so descriptive. I lovelovelovelove.

Witty. Really. I laughed really hard. Multiple times. I love your humour. You must be awesome to be around. Or maybe you scare people. *shrug* what would I know. Hilarious, anyway.

Long eyelashes? Acquaintance? *eager look* so there's going to be angsty flashbacks, right? right?

Slow. Not just *meet* *fall in love* *have a few drinks *...cough* which I love, although it hurts to have to wait sometimes. But great!

Colourblind: now that's an awesome twist! It'd be cool if he screwed up an outfit or something.

Sasori. Yes, he needs his own mention. He's so clueless, and a bit of a jerk (yes, I know it's an understatement) which I'm really liking!

Double bed. Dei gets a double bed. I think I've got a hunch where this off-screen yaoi's gonna be happening.

Oh, and how do you get there to be a "..." on a line? I mean, everytime I try and then save it, it dissapears!

Anyway, thanks so much for this, awesome change of pace, and I'll see you sometime!

Bye!!

Shun

(gosh was I right about wanting you as a beta)
van
2008-05-01 . chapter 6
hope the next chapter come it so good!!
sasoriXdeidaraXlover
2008-04-27 . chapter 6
i love the story ^_^ hope the next chpt comes soon
Kyuuka-Kyubi
2008-04-25 . chapter 3
I was so bored...so I decided to re-read your fic and drop you a review (ain't I nice? XD) Anyway, Love your disclaimer XD(and the story too ^^)
van
2008-04-24 . chapter 6
wow i can wait for next chapter
black55widow
2008-04-21 . chapter 4
Yep now we are getting somewhere!
NaruGuru
2008-04-12 . chapter 6
Ah, I really do love your work. :3 Can't wait for the next chapter and the well... prank Sasori pulls. (Won't say anything for the readers who aren't privileged like myself and know some stuff that's going to happen next. :3)
TSWargelf
2008-04-12 . chapter 6
owo;
can't wait for an update. >w
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