Sorry for the late revew, I didn't fall off the earth or anything (at least not yet...)
Anyway, moving forward...

Your story struck a poignant note especially after last night's episode with Kate going through her own trial. Of course, there could be grounds for Sayid to be hauled in too. Thanks heavens that apparently doesn't happen. Although I'm not happy he's been molded into an assasin either.
I love the 'puzzly' style of writing. It kept me guessing until the end as to where all the pieces fit. I'm glad Joo-Eun survived her untimely exit from her mother's womb.

Nori

This is very good. Very good. I especially like the Bernard piece, which surprised me: I really never considered him a significant character. You changed that. The level of detail, the interspersed song lyrics, the sadness that pervades the dentist, this was when how well you write hit me.

All three pieces flow together so well and this ends with just the perfect note of hope. Great characterizations, good storyline, wonderful.