Okay, if they just saved the Elves that were being besieged, who is threatening them now? I like the way this has been written, it has been so long since I thought in D&D terms.

Wow... That is the only way I can think to describe your story. I can't wait for you to continue. Although I did notice a few errors that are easily overmissed in while writing out storys. If you are in need of a beta reader I could help you out in that aspect. Please feel free to contact me about it if that is what you wish to do. But do please continue your story soon.

Oh, my, that situation is simply not likely to improve at all. 'Tis a quite interesting story and I'm enjoying seeing them in an alternate world.

interesting chapter

Hey thanks for updating this, I really love this story!

Nice... I like your story for two reasons 1) there is actually a plot that rowlings herself didn't seem to have for harry. 2) It doesn't have Harry automatically jumping into bed or a romance with the intended girl. Even if the relationship is with one I'm not a fan of I will continue reading because it is well written and enjoyably. The only reason I don't like the pairing is because it has become mainstream and is recently getting more and more poorly written and less enjoyable, but so have alot of other Harry pairings still the story is good. Hope to see and update soon.

What a wonderful story, I to am an avid D&D player/DM, and I can see that you drew a lot of inspiration from the books. If you are still looking for new D&D books, either for the story or gaming purposes, then I would recommend getting Heroes of Horror and Tome of Battle: Book of Nine Swords. If your looking for books with more D&D racial information, then Races of Destiny, Races of Stone, Races of the Wild, and Races of the Dragons might be beneficial. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and in seeing where you will be taking this story.

I don't really get the plot...but its interesting none the less. keep up the work.

Excellent story!

Nice... I like the story though Harry Ginny is not a romance that I agree with I can understand it and will read if its done correctly. I also think you should do a sort of review of the past in the next up date Harry's time there and what it was like and maybe a sort of chapter on the history of the tiefing or whatever you called them. Still I will read the story cause I like the way its done Harry and Ginny don't automatically jump into bed together. I also thing Harry Susan Bones or Katie Bell is a better match. To me Harry Ginny, or Hermione are to much like family to cross the romance barrier, same goes for Hermione and moRon or I um mean Ron.

Extremely good chapter! I really liked it. Update soon!

that was so sweet cant wait for more.

This was another good chapter please update this is a really good story.

That was an interesting chapter. I liked the content, but it was a little confusing. You're plot line is very interesting. I can't wait for the update!

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