Woot. I was afraid you were going to have them go too far for a moment, which didn't seem right for the characters this early.

But this is perfect. Except for the punctuation. Oh, I'm a nitpicker!

Watch out for apostrophes -- "Wakka's eye" -- and make sure you call Lulu she and not he. :)

Beautiful but sad they didn't show anything between them in FFX or FF X-2 just that they were together and had a baby. I really liked it.

one of my favorite scenes in the video game was wakka and lulu in the locker room ^_^

oh my god! I love this story! it's so sweet! :D

*le gasp!* That's completely cruel!! No one's stinkin' reviewed this awesomely wonderfully cool story! That's their loss! I absolutely LOVED it!! You know what you should do? A folloe up story on some, if not all, of the Lukka scenes and come up with your own interpretations like you did this one. I would myslef, but I prefer to read others works. They tend to be better!

-Miko Neko